Friday 31 July 2020
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Thursday 23 July 2020
my writing
The girl was running happily down the stairs. She was very happy because she wanted to go play with her pet outside. Until she went outside. The girl looked everywhere for her giraffe but she just couldn't see him. Her smile dripped down and she saw a stick so she kicked it. After that she went on her swing sadly.While she was there she went inside and made a poster saying lost giraffe. It was a colourful poster and she started knocking on the door saying they had seen her pet but everyone said no. Then she see her giraffe She is so happy I am shocked because I never knew her pet was a giraffe she is so happy like
never before. THE END
Here is the video click on the link if you would like to watch it.
The video
Here is the video click on the link if you would like to watch it.
The video
Wednesday 22 July 2020
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Monday 20 July 2020
Friday 3 July 2020
making our writing better
Our friend Lynette had a story that was just telling us instead of showing us
This is her writting
On a Saturday night with a beautiful sunset me and my friend paulah went to go swim with some West Indian Manatee. First we put on our swimming togs. Then we skipped our way to the water. We could already see some West Indian Manatee. We could hear a nice breeze. It was going through our hair. There was a beautiful splashing noise which was the waves and the changing tide. I could feel the cold water and the seaweed between my toes. While we were swimming with the West Indian Manatee, I felt a light touch to my arm under the water. I tried to hold my breath under the water to see what it was, and what I saw was amazing to look at. It was a West Indian Manatee touching my arm. When I got back up to the top of the water I saw that Paulah already had a friend which was a West Indian Manatee.
So we fixed it up but this time we showed it instead of telling us and we think ( jin, lynette and me) that we should share our story with use so here is the story that we have did today.
This is our (jin, lyentte and me) writing
On Saturday night, my friend Paulah and I sat under a blanket of warmth which streamed down from the setting sun. In the distance we saw the grey back of what we could only assume was some different kind of mammal. It looked a bit like a mermaid! With excitement, we looked at each other and realised we had the same idea. We pulled our togs quickly out of our bags and whipped them on! Then we skipped our way to the water.
We could hear a fresh calming breeze and it was flowing gently through our hair. There was a beautiful splashing noise which was the waves and the changing tide. I could feel the cold water and the seaweed squelched between my toes.
Suddenly the mermaid-like creature surrounded us.
I could feel a light swift movement brush over my arm. I tried to hold my breath under the water to see what it was, and what I saw was amazing to look at. It was a West Indian Manatee touching my arm.
When I came back up for air I saw that Paulah had a massive grin that had spread across her face. At once, I knew that she had also seen the beautiful creature that I had just witnessed.
Suddenly the mermaid-like creature surrounded us.
I could feel a light swift movement brush over my arm. I tried to hold my breath under the water to see what it was, and what I saw was amazing to look at. It was a West Indian Manatee touching my arm.
When I came back up for air I saw that Paulah had a massive grin that had spread across her face. At once, I knew that she had also seen the beautiful creature that I had just witnessed.
Thursday 2 July 2020
Thursday: Writing Task
A great white shark is a massive fish it has a powerful jaw and strong fins and a strong tail and vicious eyes long snout black eyes scaly tail hard and slimy skin curiosity face sharp teeth extremely hungry and a little clingy. Big splashes rough like sandpaper deep sea waters massive fins famous huge aggressive teeth greedy and hungry look in his face long jaw remarkably huge thorny teeth a single bite your gone fierce powerful tail empty stomach wise brain silent grey truly enormous ordinary blue remarkably hungry evil looking strange smile ten foot meanest evil looking stormy night guilty expression hungry deep sea enormous airborne long bodied predatory biggest nastiest bully great dead shadowy cold stomach. Biggest eyes massive mouth huge and pointy snout loud bite huge bite marks humongous tail. Big fins, huge nose, bad eyesight, good hearing, bad to humans, good swimming loud.
Wednesday 1 July 2020
Wednesday: Writing Task
The octopus slithered to the entry of his cave and as he kept on slithering he went pale from every step he took. He tried to forget about when he went to bed but he couldn't. In the morning he went to his other friends and told them what he saw but they never believed they thought he was crazy because when he was talking he kept on getting nervous and nervous.
His eyes kept on getting wider, he turned bright pink and his tentacles kept on moving around like he was a spider wave his hand with all 6 legs while he was making his web. While they were talking and chatting about him he tried to find the thing that he saw last night. He went on shore and found a tiny foot step he followed them and it led him to this big humongous house his eyes went huger and his face turned yellow.
He went inside the huge house slowly. Suddenly he heard talking coming from a room that had a chandelier and everything else was just incredible. Then he heard footsteps and quickly ran in this room that had all kinds of seafood like fish crab and worse of all his own kind. He got caught by a little girl who was smiling with evilness. She was one of the evil stepsisters in Cinderella.
She was like a little baby that has been sucking on its thumb for 45 years. She grabbed him by the wrist and his face went red and his tentacles suddenly flopped down and his whole body went blue.
His eyes went small again and his head flopped. The girl went to her dad who was a marine expert and asked him if she could keep him but the dad said no with his eyes all crushed up and his stomach growling. He went to put him in the ocean and before he did that the octopus remembered that thing that was in his ink and he quickly told his friend when he got back in that he saw him and they finally believed him. The end
His eyes went small again and his head flopped. The girl went to her dad who was a marine expert and asked him if she could keep him but the dad said no with his eyes all crushed up and his stomach growling. He went to put him in the ocean and before he did that the octopus remembered that thing that was in his ink and he quickly told his friend when he got back in that he saw him and they finally believed him. The end
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