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Wednesday 25 March 2020

My paragraph

One day a little boy went wandering in the forest with his parents. The parents were exploring the forest, they were in the forest to look for dangerous animals. While they were looking at something really fascinating, their son went to explore somewhere else so he kept on walking straight. Suddenly the little boy heard something he went towards the sound, it was getting louder and louder then he saw a shadow shaped as a dinosaur he went to look at what it was. Then he saw a little animal that had wings he wanted to keep so he tucked it in his pocket and ran back to his parents while he was running.He smelt smoke coming from his pocket so he looked in it and it was the little dinosaur snoring.  When he got there he showed his mum and dad and said if he could have it and they said ‘’okay but you have to give it a bath and feed him’’ then he said’’okay’’. They went back home and went to their room and had a rest. Then the mum heard a growl so she ran to her son's room and saw that it was just the dinosaur growl. After a few weeks the dinosaur got old and bigger so they had to let it go, so they did. After a few years later the little boy grew and no longer was a little boy but a big one. One day the big boy named Jake went to the same forest he found the dinosaur  he went to go look for it if it was still alive and it was he found a cave he went in it and saw a massive shadow when he looked at it he knew that it was his old pet Dino that was his dinosaurs name he wanted to live with it for a few weeks so he did and they lived happily together. 

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2 comments:

  1. Hi Legacy,

    You have used some awesome words in this writing! Well done! I like how you said "he saw a shadow shaped as a dinosaur..." That was a really cool way to introduce the dinosaur to the story.

    Miss West

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