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Tuesday 14 August 2018

My narrative

Once upon a time there lived a beautiful fairy and she lived in a beautiful garden that had lots of flowers. 





The fairy's name was Jane. One day Jane went for a walk in the forest. When she was walking she saw a mean witch in the forest wa cooking a little kid and when the witch looked away Jane quickly grabbed her and flew away and hid in a beautiful shine castle.




 When Jane was in the castle Jane asked a simple question "what is your name?" The little girl said "my name is sweetie pie" and Jane said "oh no wonder why that mean witch wanted to eat you" and sweetie pie said "why" and Jane said because witch's like pie so the witch thought you were pie and sweetie pie said "ooooh ok. Then the witch banged on the door but Jane and sweetie pie did not open the door so the witch smashed the door open and sweetie pie said why are you trying eat us then the witch said I don't want to eat you and Jane said why did you try to eat sweetie pie and the witch said I wanted to eat her because she looked like and Jane said I told you that witches like pie. Afther that sweetie pie said if the witch can come for a sleep over and the witch said yes and they all live happily ever after the end.


1 comment:

  1. Hi Legacy,

    We loved your story. It had heaps of cool fairies.
    Your drawings are beautiful. How did you draw them?
    They look like a real artist did them.

    We look forward to reading another story soon!
    From Room 27 and Ms Gaston

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