Showing posts with label 2020 Room 10 writing school work term 3. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2020 Room 10 writing school work term 3. Show all posts
Thursday, 17 September 2020
Wednesday, 16 September 2020
Monday, 14 September 2020
Tuesday, 8 September 2020
Thursday, 3 September 2020
Wednesday, 2 September 2020
Story ideas China landmarks
One lovely day my whole entire school went on a trip to the great wall of china. We heard that the great wall of China is 21,196 km long and it would be impossible to run to the top in only 2 hours. We got on a plane and travelled to china. When we got there we got off the plane and found a lovely park with a lot of shed. We had lunch and water, after that we went on a bus and drove to the great walls of china.
When we arrived we were told to sit down, as soon as we sat down we were told to be in groups of 20 so we got in a group of 20. Then we were told to walk so we did, when we were walking I told my teacher to wait for me because I was doing my shoelaces but she couldn't hear me because of all the chattering. When I was done i ran up to them but it was the wrong group so the teacher that was in their group told one of the big kids to help me find my group so we ran back and forward until we found them.
We couldn't find them so we went to random people and asked if they’ve seen a bunch of kids in red and black uniform but nobody could understand us so we ran up and down again and found other groups and said that we couldn't find our group so the teacher from their group said that we could join their group so we did and when we got to the top we found both of our group members again.
We couldn't find them so we went to random people and asked if they’ve seen a bunch of kids in red and black uniform but nobody could understand us so we ran up and down again and found other groups and said that we couldn't find our group so the teacher from their group said that we could join their group so we did and when we got to the top we found both of our group members again.
Tuesday, 25 August 2020
Monday, 24 August 2020
Thursday, 20 August 2020
Wednesday, 19 August 2020
Wed: Writing
As you could see I am standing on the side of a huge crowd as they are getting ready to watch an ice hockey game. Everyone there got their flags up in the air and are wearing red paint on their faces, some are even wearing blue paint on their faces and arms, I mean how crazy is that.
Here we have Wayne Gretzky from Canada warming up for the game. Fans are getting so crazy. That probably means the game is about to start. Here with us we have Rylan Miller also getting ready for his big game. Now the players are getting into their positions for tonight's game. Here we go, there goes the horn. We have two players trying to get the red puck off the other players and there we have it Canada got a goal. The crowd goes wild.
Their fans are screaming louder and louder and there you have it, Canada just scored three goals. The teams are trying to snatch the ball from the other team Wow why don’t you look at that Canada got another goal and the crowd goes wild. There you have it folks Canada just won that game. YAYYYY!!!!
Here we have Wayne Gretzky from Canada warming up for the game. Fans are getting so crazy. That probably means the game is about to start. Here with us we have Rylan Miller also getting ready for his big game. Now the players are getting into their positions for tonight's game. Here we go, there goes the horn. We have two players trying to get the red puck off the other players and there we have it Canada got a goal. The crowd goes wild.
Their fans are screaming louder and louder and there you have it, Canada just scored three goals. The teams are trying to snatch the ball from the other team Wow why don’t you look at that Canada got another goal and the crowd goes wild. There you have it folks Canada just won that game. YAYYYY!!!!
Tuesday, 18 August 2020
Tuesday, 11 August 2020
Brazil Writing/ non fiction
Dear Mum & dad
I had the most incredible day of my life with my bestie. It was so cool. When we got off the plane we decided to go and eat because we weren’t allowed to eat anything in the plane until we landed, but when we landed we asked if we could eat something but they said they were out of supplies so we just ran out of the plane angrily. When we got out we were so happy to smell the fresh air and another nice view from outside of the plane then that’s when it hit my bestie she got the idea of having dinner at a restaurant. We went to this lovely restaurant and got something to eat. The first thing we ate was these tiny chocolate balls that tasted like truffles. I believe they called it brigadeiro. They were delicious and they were covered in chocolate sprinkles. The second thing we ate was brigadeiro ice cream, which was probably my favourite dish of the day, then we had some chocolate milk shakes. We got full so we had to go to a hotel and sleep there. There were two beds in separate rooms so I slept in one room and Eva slept in the other room. As soon as I got on the bed I went straight to bed. Eva did too. That was the most incredible day of my life.

I had the most incredible day of my life with my bestie. It was so cool. When we got off the plane we decided to go and eat because we weren’t allowed to eat anything in the plane until we landed, but when we landed we asked if we could eat something but they said they were out of supplies so we just ran out of the plane angrily. When we got out we were so happy to smell the fresh air and another nice view from outside of the plane then that’s when it hit my bestie she got the idea of having dinner at a restaurant. We went to this lovely restaurant and got something to eat. The first thing we ate was these tiny chocolate balls that tasted like truffles. I believe they called it brigadeiro. They were delicious and they were covered in chocolate sprinkles. The second thing we ate was brigadeiro ice cream, which was probably my favourite dish of the day, then we had some chocolate milk shakes. We got full so we had to go to a hotel and sleep there. There were two beds in separate rooms so I slept in one room and Eva slept in the other room. As soon as I got on the bed I went straight to bed. Eva did too. That was the most incredible day of my life.
Monday, 10 August 2020
My writting term 3 2020
My name is Evangeline and I am having a vacation with my mum and my best friends Chanel and Amira. Me and my friends are both from Samoa. We've been friends ever since the new entrance. We were all so excited and pumped up we were going to stay in Brazil for 1 week.
Then my mum told me and my friends that we could have dinner at a restaurant called Fogo de Chão. Me and my friends were yelling so hard that we nearly fainted but there was a twist my mum would wait for us at the restaurant and we would try and find my mom's from work that had a blue ribbon on her to help us find the restaurant.
Suddenly my mum called out that her friend did not speak English and she did not understand English and that we had to try and find a way to ask her what way to go. So me and my friends set off to find the restaurant while my mum disappeared out of nowhere. As we were walking we saw a nice man who was giving out free examples so we asked if we could try one so he gave us one and it had strawberries.
After 5 secs I just remembered that my friend Chanel was allergic. Then I looked at her face and it turned purple and her lips went numb and she got a lot of bumps on her chin. I yelled out help and told someone to call a doctor but nobody could understand me but this one person was deaf but she could see that my friend wasn't feeling well so she told her mum to call an ambulance. After 1 hour and a half the ambulance finally arrived so they quickly carried her in the ambulance and took him to the hospital.
I wanted to go with her but I couldn't so I stayed with my other friend amira. I called my mum and she called a taxi straight away and took us to the hospital to see chanel. Finally we arrived at the hospital and we had to wait for the doctors to give us information about the channel so we waited for 2 hour. After 2 hours we went inside the room that chanel was in and we said hi to her but she would not respond to us so we waited for a few minutes and she finally woke up and we called her mum that she is okay and if she could still stay and she said yes. We all celebrated at the restaurant that we were meant to meet at and we were all so happy to see that the channel was okay. After the celebration we thanked the little girl who helped us and gave her a letter and a present.
Then my mum told me and my friends that we could have dinner at a restaurant called Fogo de Chão. Me and my friends were yelling so hard that we nearly fainted but there was a twist my mum would wait for us at the restaurant and we would try and find my mom's from work that had a blue ribbon on her to help us find the restaurant.
Suddenly my mum called out that her friend did not speak English and she did not understand English and that we had to try and find a way to ask her what way to go. So me and my friends set off to find the restaurant while my mum disappeared out of nowhere. As we were walking we saw a nice man who was giving out free examples so we asked if we could try one so he gave us one and it had strawberries.
After 5 secs I just remembered that my friend Chanel was allergic. Then I looked at her face and it turned purple and her lips went numb and she got a lot of bumps on her chin. I yelled out help and told someone to call a doctor but nobody could understand me but this one person was deaf but she could see that my friend wasn't feeling well so she told her mum to call an ambulance. After 1 hour and a half the ambulance finally arrived so they quickly carried her in the ambulance and took him to the hospital.
I wanted to go with her but I couldn't so I stayed with my other friend amira. I called my mum and she called a taxi straight away and took us to the hospital to see chanel. Finally we arrived at the hospital and we had to wait for the doctors to give us information about the channel so we waited for 2 hour. After 2 hours we went inside the room that chanel was in and we said hi to her but she would not respond to us so we waited for a few minutes and she finally woke up and we called her mum that she is okay and if she could still stay and she said yes. We all celebrated at the restaurant that we were meant to meet at and we were all so happy to see that the channel was okay. After the celebration we thanked the little girl who helped us and gave her a letter and a present.
Monday, 3 August 2020
My Belgium Adventure
When I first arrived I went to get some food because I was so hungry and tired from flying. It was my first time going in a plane but it was worth coming to this beautiful place. After that I went to find a hotel as soon as I found one and got in the room I quickly ran on the bed and fell asleep straight away.
On the next day I woke up and called room service for my breakfast. After that yummy delicious breakfast I wondered what I should do. So I decided to go and visit some famous places like the cloth hall. It was pretty nice there. I got to go in just because it was my first time going to Belgium. Then I met a nice lady who helped me not get lost in that big building. I invited her to dinner.
I went to bed after having dinner. It was a lovely dinner. We had fried chicken. We had a lovely dessert too. It was ice cream with chocolate syrup. The next day I was packing my things to get ready for my trip to Samoa. But first I went to all the places I visited and gave everyone I met a present.
On the next day I woke up and called room service for my breakfast. After that yummy delicious breakfast I wondered what I should do. So I decided to go and visit some famous places like the cloth hall. It was pretty nice there. I got to go in just because it was my first time going to Belgium. Then I met a nice lady who helped me not get lost in that big building. I invited her to dinner.
I went to bed after having dinner. It was a lovely dinner. We had fried chicken. We had a lovely dessert too. It was ice cream with chocolate syrup. The next day I was packing my things to get ready for my trip to Samoa. But first I went to all the places I visited and gave everyone I met a present.
Wednesday, 29 July 2020
Tuesday, 28 July 2020
Monday, 27 July 2020
Friday, 24 July 2020
Thursday, 23 July 2020
my writing
The girl was running happily down the stairs. She was very happy because she wanted to go play with her pet outside. Until she went outside. The girl looked everywhere for her giraffe but she just couldn't see him. Her smile dripped down and she saw a stick so she kicked it. After that she went on her swing sadly.While she was there she went inside and made a poster saying lost giraffe. It was a colourful poster and she started knocking on the door saying they had seen her pet but everyone said no. Then she see her giraffe She is so happy I am shocked because I never knew her pet was a giraffe she is so happy like
never before. THE END
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