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The girl was running happily down the stairs. She was very happy because she wanted to go play with her pet outside. Until she went outside. The girl looked everywhere for her giraffe but she just couldn't see him. Her smile dripped down and she saw a stick so she kicked it. After that she went on her swing sadly.While she was there she went inside and made a poster saying lost giraffe. It was a colourful poster and she started knocking on the door saying they had seen her pet but everyone said no. Then she see her giraffe She is so happy I am shocked because I never knew her pet was a giraffe she is so happy like never before. THE END

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